Prompt for Day 9
Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to:
* Use at least twelve words from this list: flap, winter, torch, pail, jug, strum, lever, massage, octopus, marionette, stow, pumice, rug, jam, limp, campfire, startle, wattle, bruise, chimney, tome, talon, fringe, walker;
* Include something that tastes terrible;
* Include some part (from a few words to several lines) of a previous poem that didn’t
quite pan out; and
* Include a sound that makes you happy.
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12 Words used: flap, winter, jug, strum, massage, stow, jam, campfire, startle, bruise, chimney, fringe.
Tastes terrible: Sour wine
Lines from previous poem: It's the end of his journey, there's no where left to go.
Sound that makes me happy: reverently gives thanks
It's The End Of His Journey
there's no where left to go.
The old man strums his guitar
under a bruised winter sky,
jug of sour wine at his knee.
Smoke from his campfire curls up
through the fringed chimney of pines.
Startled, a raucous crow caws and flaps.
It's the end of his journey,
there's no where left to go.
The man stows his guitar,
massages arthritic fingers
pulls out a pot of jam
and his last crust of bread,
reverently gives thanks
for his meager fare.
It's the end of his journey,
there's no where left to go.
6 comments:
What a lovely poem with beautiful imagery.
Well done!
Amazing! How lovely - what intense imagery. bruised winter sky is a phrase I wish I'd written. I can see this old man - nice work indeed.
This is lovely. I think you have done brilliantly with a difficult prompt.
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Nice work! Love the "fringed chimney of pines." This poem holds together really well.
Thanks for visiting my site and for your positive feedback on my effort on this really trying prompt. Let's hope tomorrow's is much easier!
Lovely poem - such a clear image at the start and such a clear feeling at the end. This prompt has led to some really interesting poems.
I like the "fringed chimney of pines" too. Great interpretation of the prompt.
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