From The Sunday Whirl, Brenda's wordle words:
ashen, knack, scald, sisters, crush, instinct,
story, scatter, urges, shards, charm, whispering
They were both Missus Bloom,
the story goes,
his wife and his sister,
an unlikely little family,
living side by side
in the big brick house
across the street,
long after the man who brought
them together passed away.
There was whispering at first,
how they'd never get along,
two women in the same house
is seldom easy. But one had
a knack for cooking, the other
an instinct for cleaning and so
they settled into a routine.
When our first baby was
born they sent over
a tiny yellow sweater
and bonnet, the pattern
intricate, charmingly
trimmed with satin ribbons
but I never knew which
of them had made it.
The years passed
they sold the house,
moved to a small apartment.
Then we heard of the tragedy,
the sister, kind and gentle spirit,
killed crossing a street.
The wife died shortly after, heart
broken, she'd lost her best friend.
Process Notes:
I really struggled with these words. Then I decided to focus on the word sisters, and remembered this true story.
11 comments:
A true story, Marianne? How very sad. I am glad you persevered with the words. This has a very gentle tone to it.
Pamela
That's so sad. We used to have two brothers living next door, one of which was a drug addict. He was hit by a car one night, but bounced back up. So glad they don't live there anymore.
I've always suspected that women must learn to love and recognise the other. Thanks for sharing the true story, Marianne.
It's a wonderful story, beautifully told.
This has a god flow and story which works so well with the words in the challenge.
This is a wonderful true story...sad, but the joy of finding each other and having that time underscores life. We all need "sisters." Well done, Marianne.
A wonderful story!
I am that baby that the yellow sweater was for! What a lovely poem, Mom.
Well told, M.
Reminding me that my life is full of such glancing interactions. I'd be exasperated when a novelist was so skimpy.
Interesting storyline. You did a very good putting into a poem
Marianne, this is a lovely recounting of a true story through the use of wordle words...nicely done.
~Paula
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