Shadorma
The Shadorma is a Spanish poetic form made up of a stanza of six lines (sestet) with no set rhyme scheme, and a syllable pattern: 3/5/3/3/7/5. Inspired by Pamela at Poetry with me ...
Under the Moon
Sky-crazy
confusion of stars.
Forbidden,
payments due.
Seductive songs spark passion,
dancing cheek to cheek.
5 comments:
Your Shadorma is quite lovely. Especially nice is "sky-crazy confusion of stars."
~Brenda
Marianne, you did this form beautifully.
"Seductive songs spark passion,
dancing cheek to cheek."
I love that, what a lovely image.
Pamela
I am happy, I was an inspiration:)
I've not met this form before. You make it sparkle.
Your shadorma is mysterious and lovely and leaves me with questions, as a good poem should!
Indeed,so what have you been up to Madam?
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