Brenda's new wordle words:
fires * smolder * drowned * ice
fleeting * planet * spark * mindless
trapped * sky * diamond * oblivious *
silence
Ice and Fire
November skies ice
with diamond star-fires,
spark and smolder
in mindless oblivion.
Trapped planets spin,
drown in ancient silence.
All the world is a dream,
fleeting and ephemeral.
7 comments:
I'm impressed with the skyward nature of the pieces this week. It is a joy to read each one. The world is a dream, the older I get the fleeter it flies. Then what? Will I awaken on some new and distant shore...or simply think, no more.
You got me going somewhere, with this one, Marianne. :) Thank you, it's always a pleasrue when a poem evokes further thought and questioning.
Beautiful! Esp. love the last two lines!
Succinctly put and oh so true, Marianne.
Quite beautiful, Marianne. I also love the last two lines.
Pamela
Loved the last lines!
oblivion
That is lovely! Really like what you did with the words,
I adore this,
:)
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